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A poem by yours truly ;3 hope you like it

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Post  Cyndal Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:48 pm

From Shadows to Dawn

Troubled hearts and minds come together to form one kind.
Each has been in the dark but they have found a spark.
They are careful not to be wrong for they want this to become strong.
So fearful of the world’s pain they drink the feeling like sweet Champaign.
Both have been so alone so they huddle together in the face of the unknown.
Asking if this is real or just irony moving in for the kill.
Because how can two far away hearts not fall to parts?
Time passes and hearts drift close and the past hurt becomes nothing more than a ghost.
Together they are whole, no turning back now this spark has taken control.
They have never felt this and both now yearn for the other’s kiss.
They have found a special kind of bliss away from the world’s ugly hiss.
Forget if it’s for better or worse, neither is willing to go no matter if this becomes a curse.
Their love is strong it will not become a sad love song.
They look forward not back and the world seems less black.
The shadows are now gone, erased by the lovely new dawn.
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Hope you all like it, please do tell me your honest opinions.^^
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Post  GQ~Hiro Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:06 am

if i was an english teacher, i'd give A+ for it o.<d

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Post  Pattity Thu Dec 09, 2010 10:21 am

To be honest, this touched my heart.
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Post  Cyndal Thu Dec 09, 2010 3:33 pm

Thanks so much, I am honored by your words. Idk if I'll post more, depends on if anyone wants to hear it. XD
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Post  Pattass Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:17 pm

Ofc, post more.


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Post  Terra Wed May 18, 2011 10:18 am

i really loved it remindes me of me and xilo ty for it huggles. I love you

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